So this is me testing the waters a little with some original fiction. Well, mostly original. This is stuff that I wrote in conjunction with a book series that one of my very dear friends is working on. She introduced me to these two characters, Vitas Lamontange and Jason Sharpe, and I fell in love with them, and my friend was kind enough to let me write the back story of their relationship. I never actually finished writing their epic love story, but I did get about 26K words into it. I figured I'd start posting it here and if there's interest, I'd put some more effort into finishing it up.
This is the first four thousand words. In the way of information that you'll need to know that might not be covered in this--I didn't worry much about world building since this was mostly something I just did for me and my friend and both of us already know the world building details--so things you might need to know follow: this is set in a version of our modern world where some people (called Organics) have super powers (telepathy, empathy, telekinesis, super strength, etc etc. Think X-Men). Jason is an empath and Vitas has telekinesis. Vitas also works for an international organization called the Covenant, which helps Organics out of trouble and also works as protectors to another class of super powered people called Elementals. Other than that, I think everything you'll read is pretty straight forward.
Also, since this is original stuff, I would reallyreally appreciate any sort of feedback--positive, negative, constructive. Especially, let me know if you're interested in seeing more of this :)( Read more... )